Thứ Năm, 20 tháng 9, 2012

Nguyễn Thị Khiếu


Name: Nguyễn Thị Khiếu
Class: 10E20
Entry 1
CATS
I've never understood why women love cats. Cats are independent, they don't listen, they don't come in when you call, they like to stay out all night, and when they're home they like to be left alone and sleep.
In other words, every quality that women hate in a man, they love in a cat.
1.     Rhetorical devices:
-         Simile: the man and cats have same qualities.
-         Paradox: woman loves cats which have qualities like man but they hate man.
2.     Message: woman hates man’s qualities.
Entry 2
“I LOVED YOU”
-        Puskin -
I loved you: and, it may be, from my soul
The former love has never gone away,
But let it not recall to you my dole;
I wish not sadden you in any way.

I loved you silently, without hope, fully,
In diffidence, in jealousy, in pain;
I loved you so tenderly and truly,
As let you else be loved by any man.
1.     Rhetorical devices:
-         Rhyme: soul – dole, away – way, fully – truly.
-         Repitition: I loved you.
-         Simile: As let you else be loved by any man.
2.     Message: Describing a desperate love and a melancholy tune, the poem  shows a vehemence and magnanimity of people’s heart with a non-resultful love.
Entry 3
PHOTO

1.     Rhetorical devices:
-         Simile: the race between the rich and the poor.
-         Symbol: Graduate symbols of people who study well but are still poor; the man sitting in the car symbols of the rich
-         Antithesis: the rich >< the poor
2.     Message: Be not proud why you’re poor but excillent; however, ask yourself why you’re excillent but still poor.

1 nhận xét:

  1. in general, your entries are all interesting meaningful. However, in my opinion, it will be better if you spend some time considering my following comments:
    -with the first entry, it doesn't use any simile words, so i think it should be metaphor (cat's quality- man's quality) there. And i think the message must be "women should love a man like they love their cat"
    -the second entry also uses parallelism ("In diffidence, in jealousy, in pain"). in addition, i should think the last sentence uses paradox (the boy loves the girls very much, but he still lets her be chased after by another one), instead of simile. (i think "as" is not a simile word in that context)
    -about the last entry, the link you supply seems not to be the original. Besides, it also uses metonymy (the vehicle _ the quality of life). furthermore, i reckon the message should be " the social injustice between the rich and the poor".
    Anyway, thank you so much for sharing!:)

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