Entry 1 _ Bùi Phương Thúy
Item1: Poem
Love is like the wild rose-briar;
Friendship like the holly-tree.
The holly is dark when the
rose-briar blooms,
But which will bloom most
constantly?
The wild rose-briar is sweet in
spring,
Its summer blossoms scent the air;
Yet wait till winter comes again,
And who will call the wild-briar
fair?
Then, scorn the silly rose-wreath
now,
And deck thee with holly's sheen,
That, when December blights thy
brow,
He still may leave thy garland
green.
~Emily Bronte
Rhetorical devices:
- Rhyme: air – fair; now –
brow; sheen - green
- Simile: love vs the wild
rose-briar; friendship vs. the holly tree
- Metaphor: bloom (existence
of relationships); spring, summer (happy time); winter (unhappy time)
Message:
Love an friendship are important relationships in people’s life, although love
is beautiful, it might not always turn out as ones hope but friendship would
stay and keep them on their feet even during unhappy time . Honor friendship
and don’t forget the strong friendship during happy time in love
Item 2: Story
Two men,
both seriously ill, occupied the same hospital room. One man was allowed
to sit up in his bed for an hour a day to drain the fluids from his lungs. His
bed was next to the room's only window. The other man had to spend all his time
flat on his back.The men talked for hours on end. They spoke of their wives and families, their homes, their jobs, their involvement in the military service, where they had been on vacation. And every afternoon when the man in the bed next to the window could sit up, he would pass the time by describing to his roommate all the things he could see outside the window.
The man in the other bed would live for those one-hour periods where his world would be broadened and enlivened by all the activity and color of the outside world. The window overlooked a park with a lovely lake, the man had said. Ducks and swans played on the water while children sailed their model boats. Lovers walked arm in arm amid flowers of every color of the rainbow. Grand old trees graced the landscape, and a fine view of the city skyline could be seen in the distance. As the man by the window described all this in exquisite detail, the man on the other side of the room would close his eyes and imagine the picturesque scene.
One warm afternoon the man by the window described a parade passing by. Although the other man could not hear the band, he could see it in his mind's eye as the gentleman by the window portrayed it with descriptive words. Unexpectedly, an alien thought entered his head: Why should hehave all the pleasure of seeing everything while I never get to see anything? It didn't seem fair. As the thought fermented, the man felt ashamed at first. But as the days passed and he missed seeing more sights, his envy eroded into resentment and soon turned him sour. He began to brood and found himself unable to sleep. He should be by that window - and that thought now controlled his life.
Late one night, as he lay staring at the ceiling, the man by the window began to cough. He was choking on the fluid in his lungs. The other man watched in the dimly lit room as the struggling man by the window groped for the button to call for help. Listening from across the room, he never moved, never pushed his own button which would have brought the nurse running. In less than five minutes, the coughing and choking stopped, along with the sound of breathing. Now, there was only silence--deathly silence.
The following morning, the day nurse arrived to bring water for their baths. When she found the lifeless body of the man by the window, she was saddened and called the hospital attendant to take it away--no words, no fuss. As soon as it seemed appropriate, the man asked if he could be moved next to the window. The nurse was happy to make the switch and after making sure he was comfortable, she left him alone.
Slowly, painfully, he propped himself up on one elbow to take his first look. Finally, he would have the joy of seeing it all himself. He strained to slowly turn to look out the window beside the bed. It faced a blank wall.
Rhetorical devices:
- Metaphor: the window (points
of view towards life); the man near window (the optimists); sceneries outside
the window (happy things)
Message:
The pursuit of happiness is the matter of choice; it is the way we choose to
express. Happiness will come to people who are optimistic towards life.
Item 3 : Cartoon
Rhetorical device:
- Metaphor: the fish (natural
sources, environment), the man (present generations), the child (future
generations)
Message:
we are overexploiting natural sources
and destroying environment without caring about the future of our new generations.
http://allspirit.co.uk/emilybronte.html
http://blog.humanityy.com/en/30-great-environment-cartoons
http://classes.bus.oregonstate.edu/fall-07/ba465/Stories/The%20Window.htm
http://hanoimoi.com.vn/newsdetail/Van-hoa/543076/mieng-ghep-nguoc-gianh-giai-nhat-biem-hoa-ve-moi-truong.htm

at first, you did a great job. bravo!!!. Second, i would like to add some more information that you could consider.
Trả lờiXóa*item 1:
-rhetorical devices:rhetorical question ("which will bloom most constantly?" and "who will call the wild-briar fair?")
-message:"love an friendship"? i think it should be better if it is "love and friendship"
(a very little spelling mistake^^).
*item 2: it's such a meaning story. I really love it.
-rhetorical devices: climax: the man far from the window decided not to push the button that can help the man next to the window call the nurses or doctors for help. Then that man died.
-message: besides optimistic, it is kindliness. although be in hopeless situations, never give up and don't be afraid to share your love.
*item 3: it's perfectly good ^^
thank you very much for your useful comments!
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